Waking up this morning,
Felt like a load on my mind.
Feeling l got the world on my shoulders.
But my friend said that I'd problems the size of boulders.
Broke down my way of thinking.
Got my lifeboat floating.
Not capsizing under stress or sinking.
Got rid of those big stones.
Broke them them down like I did.
Now I got rocks in my head instead.
Rocks in my head by Ibrar Ahmad Siddiqi 23.11.2016
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow a great impressive metaphor poem creatively thought up. The capsize part was esp nice. We all feel llike that sometimes so a freeverse on the topic was amazingly done by u poet. Pls do comment my latest poem too on Ashura.