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Rose & Jasmine Say Together It Is Nice

Rating: ★4.5

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Rose and Jasmine grace the garden
with their pink and white shades
Cuckoo like song birds sing their praise
Flowers enjoy the song and nod their heads in breeze
Poets with their pen put them in their verse
Without permission you pluck the flowers with ease
But Rose & Jasmine say together it is nice!

KAVIN CHARALAN

Saturday, July 10, 2021

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Luis A. Estable 11 July 2021

This is not bad. I feel the last two verses are out place here. One has the word nice which does not explain much. Try using one more descriptive. The verse before the last comes too abrupt and forceful and spoils a bit the harmony of the poem and the flow of the logic or sweet connection of it

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