Rubaiyat - Bitter Truth Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - Bitter Truth

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If you fall, I’ll be there said floor to me
And I’m flat since then, I’m humble,
And down to earth after realizing this bitter truth of life
when I die no one will carry me and embrace me other than earth.

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2015

Yes you are philosophically right. After death bodies are embraced by Earth only. Realizing this bitter truth of life is very amazing. Wise sharing...10

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T Rajan Evol 21 November 2015

This is fantastic Rubaiyat, Invictus.

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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

Yes. Somewhere down the line when we stand all a lot of people come and shake hands with us, and when we fall no one stands beside us.. A very well written poem Asim.. Thank you for sharing...

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 November 2015

A philosophical tone in this rubaiyat, Catching up with, Asim Thanks for sharing.

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Liza Sudina 17 November 2015

Interesting what waits us there. Great speed, I think!

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Shakil Ahmed 17 November 2015

nice poem, beautiful ending, yes it is the bitter truth, thanks for sharing.

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