Rubaiyat ~ Self Destruction Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat ~ Self Destruction

Rating: 5.0


When body starts controlling our mind
Our soul goes far away from the goals
And we get lost in this world
Neither we are able to fill this void,
Nor can do well other than self-destruction.

Friday, December 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: wonder,rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2021

A body not controlled by mind is like a machine. A poem of great insight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2021

A body not controlled by our mind is like a machine . A poem of great insight.

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Ricky Mangathen 10 December 2021

Mundful poem for body to giveaway.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2021

You are absolutely right dear Dr Asim! Thoughtfully put.

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David Wood 10 December 2021

Some minds can be uncontrollable, some minds are empty, British politicians for example, mindless and brainless.5* poem tho.

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