Saddle Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Saddle

Rating: 5.0


Put a saddle on my bosom
With your silver smile
Or across my heart beat
If my love hurts you,
To ride on your soul
Through my barren life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 28 October 2011

amazing.......no words to explain.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 October 2011

Short but greatly expressive of sentiments love...good work

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

Riding the wind, I guess one would need a saddle! I cannot comprehend all this mixed feelings. You're good... :)

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Harindhar Reddy 26 October 2011

By Jove! I am fascinated by these poetic lines.......... 'Put a saddle on my bosom With your silver smile Or across my heart beat' Ideal people often brevity is the soul of wit. This poem is certainly short and sweet. I really enjoyed this poem albeit it is short it is lucid. It may contain a few words yet it is sumptuous. The theme of the poem is again remarkable at it is on universal theme love. Let me doff the poet for his emotional, sensitive poem on the significant topic. Great going. With many wishes to the fellow poet with good flair to write on such genuine topics. Keep sharing many more poems like this dearest poem. Let me doff the poet......

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Unwritten Soul 26 October 2011

This one a bit mixed between bitter and sweet, but it under sweet rack category... The feeling swimming around the mood and i feel you have such good way to flow out the mind words..and transferred well into this poetry :) Nice Vipins nice..keep more..._Unwritten Soul

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