Put a saddle on my bosom
With your silver smile
Or across my heart beat
If my love hurts you,
To ride on your soul
Through my barren life.
Short but greatly expressive of sentiments love...good work
Riding the wind, I guess one would need a saddle! I cannot comprehend all this mixed feelings. You're good... :)
By Jove! I am fascinated by these poetic lines.......... 'Put a saddle on my bosom With your silver smile Or across my heart beat' Ideal people often brevity is the soul of wit. This poem is certainly short and sweet. I really enjoyed this poem albeit it is short it is lucid. It may contain a few words yet it is sumptuous. The theme of the poem is again remarkable at it is on universal theme love. Let me doff the poet for his emotional, sensitive poem on the significant topic. Great going. With many wishes to the fellow poet with good flair to write on such genuine topics. Keep sharing many more poems like this dearest poem. Let me doff the poet......
This one a bit mixed between bitter and sweet, but it under sweet rack category... The feeling swimming around the mood and i feel you have such good way to flow out the mind words..and transferred well into this poetry :) Nice Vipins nice..keep more..._Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
amazing.......no words to explain.