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Sadness - Poem by asma writer

sometimes life gets heavy
weakness erodes my soul
pieces and pieces already
till it became a big hole
- -
Strength is the forbidden word in the world inside
Love is the missing word beyond
And life goes on and on
- -
Always waiting for any light spot
See, i'm not asking for a lot
But Instead of light i got a shot
The shot which changed the plot


Comments about Sadness by asma writer

  • Freshman - 510 Points Houssam Mokhtari (9/2/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    It's just showing your inner and reveals how sad you were I hope you are ok and yeah good poem :)) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,988 Points John Westlake (5/4/2014 2:44:00 PM)

    Great poem. Like the rhymes. I hope you didn't actually get shot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (4/17/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    wow! great! its a perfect poem Asma! i did enjoy the rhymes...and the meaning...i really liked it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chey Gibson (3/24/2014 2:56:00 PM)

    awsome
    poem thats supper awesome i've never read a poem that deep (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014


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