Sailed Poem by Sandra Feldman

Sailed



Have you ever felt the dark
Closing in, like a dying spark,
That cannot win?
That's how I feel tonight,
Hopeless, sad and without Light.

Saturday, September 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hopelessness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 11 September 2016

Darkness lies in wait for us all, Sweet Poet- nature's way. All roses fade. Enjoy what you can, while you can, and come what may. The beautiful comment by Govind Ramakrishnan, I am certain, is the view held by all those who have come to love you through your beautiful poetry.

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2016

Yes, I know, there is no rose without a thorn, nor no life without pain, It' just that sometimes Life seems so in vain. You, dearest friend, are so very complimentary of my work, always. I don't deserve such praise. I simply write what I feel, always surprised and happy when it has for someone, some appeal. Thank you so much for your wonderful words.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 10 September 2016

Dear Ms. Feldman, You are a jewel in the night sky Who lights up our lives, Day in and day out With your magical spark. That poetic self within you Ignites All around you that is dark.... Please remember Where there is light, there can be no darkness

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2016

Sometimes words are not enough, Can't express gratitude felt, You're words to me are such a gift, Undeserved as they may be, They were as lovely as could be, Bringing great happiness to me. I thank you, Govind, vey deeply and with all my heart. Your words did really bring me Light.

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2016

Those times sneak up and grab hold of many of us. Different approaches can ameliorate the effects, but sometimes it is good to just dive headlong into the abyss and then take a deep breath when you reemerge.

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2016

I do agree, better express than suppress. Much healthier. Always such good advise, from a great poet, Who is also, very nice.

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