Saints Poem by Sandra Feldman

Saints

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I have no answers
Only complaints,
About All of Us,
Including myself
And I suffer
Because of having
Been told,
That "once upon a time"
There were other creatures
That roamed,
Distant lands
And were called
"Saints"
While now we're all
Red angry devils,
Hiding, our war paint.

Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Please don't take the color "red" as a racist color because it is used
mostly for devils.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lodigiana Poetess 16 August 2020

A very emotionally charged piece that was a pleasure to read. Nice work Sandra! Lodigiana x

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Susan Williams 15 August 2020

Complaints? But you are our resident sunshine... I think there must be a mistake. I must object. You might have dark observations at times but you never harp, whine, moan or groan. This poem does not complain, it reports the truth.

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Michael Hopkins 15 August 2020

I imagine there are still a few saints but not as many as in years past because they have been censored and also because the concentration in our times has been directed by fear. Yor expressed your emotion well in this poem Sandra.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 August 2020

Lol. Indeed we are but if you look closer the latter day saints are among us and you might be one of them.

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