Salvation Poem by Adisty Mulianty

Salvation

Rating: 5.0


When I was feeling blue
I only have to look into those innocent eyes
Then, dissolved all the troubled inside

When regrets and remorse occupy my thoughts
Only with your cheery smile and laugh
I will regain my spirit at once

Even
When I was tumble down
Crawling like helpless human being
Squealing alone in the mist of misery
You always
And forever be
My salvation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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