hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,325 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Same Nature - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Pride is almost hurt
When followed by bad start
It causes no joy
Sadness takes over and annoy

It has been nurtured
Each individual has same nature
No downfall should be caused
No halt should be there or progress paused

There is nobody to support
Once you loose position and rapport
People who were by your side
Gradually disappear and divide

It is rightly said
The foundation is already laid
Everybody may praise rising sun
In evening even birds return

Success should not make you blind
Failure should not make you unkind
Take each leaf by its virtue
Even street dog has its value

Make sure you are unique
Behave in same manner with etiquette
Loose no composure even in setback
The original position may certainly comeback
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Comments about Same Nature by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 65,325 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 65,325 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2013 4:29:00 AM)


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    We love happy people, good advice.

    Bruce Collingwood2 minutes ago
    Nice piece of writing.
    Comment +1
    Interesting (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,325 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2013 4:29:00 AM)

    Semantic D'Moi1 minute ago
    Love the language structure in its quaint way.
    Comment +1
    great structure and flow (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,325 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2013 4:29:00 AM)

    Randy Lynn1 minute ago
    i could only ask for more adverbs and adjectives (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,325 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    Pride is almost hurt
    When followed by bad start (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 12, 2013


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