I wanted you to know
That I had loved you so
I have told you once,
Twice or trice
But you didn’t hear
The beats of my heart
You have turned your face
And looked away
You didn’t see my eyes
Telling you were there
Living deep inside my heart
Each and everyday
Forever and always
As nights glow with the stars
I kept my love in silence
And never showed
You didn’t see
How much you mean to me
You were my breathing stars
My angel fallen from the sky
Whom I wished to have
Whom I yearned to love
From the distance of my eyes
I thought you never cared
Nor you never dared to love me
So I left you in your place
Talking to people of your age
Since I was just 16
And you were 33
I felt you didn’t need me
To stay and wait for the magical key
So I left and had my own way
Leaving out from your place
Now after several years
Our roads again accidentally meet
I am now 26 and you are 43
Many things have changed
To our life’s own little pace
I have grown to a woman
And you still the dazzling man
More successful and dignified
But still something I realized
There is one thing that didn’t change
One thing stays truly the same
My heart still beats fast for you
Still I am blushing, trembling
Whenever I see your sporty beard face
What does that mean, so I ask my self?
Does it mean that I am still in love with YOU?
O I hate to say but its true……
Inspired by: Hari Khabrani's poem 'Wherein Fell Love For'
lovely write cheryl very moving actually this happened to me lol 10 my poetress
Catrina very beautifully written. I always praise your poems. Make the poem dedicated tome dear poet.......10++
Some things in life will never change, feelings we hold will ever remain so dear 10 Daniel
here it is..now this is so beautiful and straight from the heart.A write that I can also relate to. this is a far cry from your other beautiful writes.I just love and adore this.Wonderful
Lovely romanticism in a modern version. Gosh at 16 vs.33 and then 26 as against 43. It's not too early and too late if we speak in ratio. As the saying goes, age doesn't matter. But I guess this man has ears but cannot hear, he has eyes but cannot see. Would you say love is blind? I'm generous today, I give you 10 for this. Keep the change, Cathy?
your proceed your love............ smile! smile! ! smile! ! ! ........ the loveliest angle living in the heart alive......... rajenath
This came from the heart Very touching and warm... The flow of words are excellent But I felt a line in the first stanza... Should of been different... This was written with love So you get top marks... Keep expressing Keep pouring your love on P.H Thank you very much For being inspirational Cheers
Such honest and tender writing Catrina where your heart knows how you really feel, but perhaps your head reasons in another way. I love the way you poem is positioned within the stanzas and the romance this poem evokes. 10 love Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is a feeling, not a decision. You can't choose who you love. If you could, it would be much simpler, but less magical.