Sands Poem by Zoe Nyght

Sands

Rating: 4.9


gentle sands falling
silently through my fingertips,
blowing dandelion style in the
swaying
breeze from tomorrow;
the hourglass tips
rocking back and forth and
here
i
am,
fumbling around blurred edges,
pressing smeared fingertips against
the lining of my own charade.
i am pantomiming
with all the might i possess
but
you won't understand and
sleep is nigh upon me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasra Al Adawi 09 April 2005

gentle sands falling silently through my fingertips, blowing dandelion style in the swaying breeze from tomorrow; the hourglass tips I loved this poem, especially the above wordings...

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 07 March 2005

haunting. the mood is hypnotizing

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Christine Magee 07 March 2005

Beautiful images. I love your style Chrissie

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Zoe Nyght

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Artesia, California
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