Persian Nightingale


Satan - Poem by Persian Nightingale

He swears an oath
To tell the truth
The whole truth
And
Nothing
But the truth
Then he tells
A truth
His last lie
Satan

(2008/7/15)


Comments about Satan by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/29/2009 2:26:00 AM)

    Truly said. May Allah bless us and save from that satan.10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 38 Points Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen (7/17/2008 4:40:00 PM)

    short...but you tell the truth...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (7/16/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    The faint limit between truth and lie is sometimes difficult to catch...
    A very nice write! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (7/16/2008 3:33:00 AM)

    He was indeed in league with the devil, another profound write from you Nightingale,10 for this,

    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,613 Points Seema Chowdhury (7/15/2008 9:58:00 PM)

    very nice and true.good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (7/15/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    Ahh when Satan speaks his words you know are (all untrue)
    You can't believe a thing - he says to you! !
    Splendid write! *10*!
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (7/15/2008 1:35:00 PM)

    Short and original poems, Nightingale, 10....
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Kyle Hamp (7/15/2008 1:30:00 PM)

    very nice.
    i like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 19, 2008


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