Saved Poem by Stevie Taite

Saved

Rating: 5.0


Scraped 
the inside surface of my rib cage

Hell
Was never turning to the next page

Stagnant
Murdering surface of the pond weed

Sealed
Entombed and stifled by the wrong need

Scared
Was how malignancy had grown strong

Faced
Was how to kick it into head long 
 
Healed 
The mind that breaks out of its prison

Saved
The ledge that sanity had given

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes we feel stuck in a depression but we have the strength to break out or save ourselves from a plummet of no return!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiger Lily Love 10 December 2012

I really enjoyed this! From the way you set it up to the message portrayed. My favorite lines: Healed The mind that breaks out of its prison Saved The ledge that sanity had given Very powerful verses in my opinion.

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Kelvin Owusu 17 September 2012

theres none i can really say bout this, its very well written, a great piece of poetry like always

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Kelly Seale 16 September 2012

oh my Stevie, Love this, know, I love this. - Kelly.

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Stevie Taite

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