Saving Face. Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Saving Face.

Rating: 5.0

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i die honourably.
committing hara kiri
erases my disgrace.

only a coward
evades responsibility
for his past actions.

honour demands
I must voluntarily
draw my blade across.

cut from left to right
die slowly in agony
suffer stoically.

.until a good friend
strikes off my head: sets me free
from my misery.

seldom seen today.
but in the past the only way
to correct mistakes.

to die honourably
committing hara kiri.
erases all disgrace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Bravo! Ivor, well penned piece, great talent, keep it up! 10++++ HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

ivor or ivor.e hogg

Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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