Neela Nath

Say You Don't Love Me

Tell the truth, pierce me
with your innocence,
say you don't love me.
My bed isn't adorned
with the roses,
and you mock, ridicule
before the world
to prove me a dwarf,
a dwarf whose every action
is meant for cracking jokes.
My tedious ways
don't permit me to walk
I don't see wonder
in any work of god.
A peaceful place
away from all the
fun and frolic, call me.
I want to say adieu,
adieu to you,
before that say once,
you don't love me,
and all you said,
was false and mere fun.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 04, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 5:55:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful poem Hari. Emotions are not meant to be played with. nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/7/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    You write with such emotion and deep feelings. This is a really good poem Hari. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (6/6/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    It is not good to lead a person on and say that
    you love them. The person will believe with all their
    heart and soul. When they find out otherwise they
    are crushed beyond repair. A heartfelt write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/6/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    That's the bomb Hari, in more ways than one, well penned indeed, emphasis on indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (6/6/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    You not sounds right here, have some problems? or is it just a tale? ? well if you have bad times, tell me and i will listen..we will try to solve it..we are friends right? _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/5/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Poignant poem with intense display of emotions, one for whom, outward appearance has more value than your internal summits, love is not their cup of tea.let them go....well presented. (Report) Reply

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