Scared & Confused Poem by Anhi Jordan

Scared & Confused



Free verse or Rhyme,
The end result is the same time after time,
My heart spelled out on the page,
Yet you still safe and warm in your little cage,
Not noticing the pain and the agony,
The tears welled up in my eyes,
Lost and confused,
My voice worn and overused,
Speaking to my heart and mind,
But frightened to speak to you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written when I was around 15. I have a hard time expressing myself at times and so I began to write random lines of poetry. Comment and tell me what you think, try not to criticize me too harshly though! :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Utsav Patel 11 November 2013

That's good stuff. But if you're rhyme then it must be in every next lines. You missed couple of times. (agony eyes, mind you)

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Anhi Jordan

Anhi Jordan

Tallahassee, Fl
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