Scent Poem by hassan hayati

Scent

Rating: 4.9


The scent of your hair, I Inhale today
To me it seems as roses and daffodils in May
It reaches a year or so you have left
To me it seems decades or a century,
you are away
I am sure you are around today
I had heard that the body is just a cage
For the bird of spirit with all plumage
The bird of your soul is flying around
I know you are here, accept my deep homage
I am sure you are around today
For a trace of you, my heart flew the lands
To find a sign, I passed all bands
Do I ever forget your delicate fragrance?
I just smell you, although I die
to touch your hands
I am sure you are around today
I can't see you, while you see all my pray
Do not fly away, please stay
You divulge, your love another time
For this moment and the glory, my life I pay
I am sure you are around today
You are around today

Scent
Saturday, September 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

It seems as roses and daffodils in May spread fragrance. Brilliant perception of love opens wings. Love is around today to glorify life. Deep homage is definitely accepted. Nicely penned love poem is shared here.10

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Hassan Hayati 14 September 2017

thank you for your kind concern. It is my pleasure to see great experts read what I write.

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Indira Renganathan 21 June 2021

A heart drowned in love longing for the departed soul....excellent expression lifts this poem so high.....full*****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 November 2020

A fabulous poem on love, dear Poet Hassan. The fragrance of the person you love, wafting around you, so much like a mystic scent. The loving spirit flying around like a bird, the delicate fragrance following you everywhere. A beautiful poem on love and fragrance, so wonderfully penned by you, Hassan. Top stars for this fabulous poem that i enjoyed reading so much.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 September 2019

Poet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsSend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by hassan hayati: 11 / 16« prev. poemnext poem » Scent - Poem by hassan hayati Autoplay next video The scent of your hair, I Inhale today To me it seems as roses and daffodils in May It reaches a year or so you have left To me it seems decades or a centu... full of emotion, description that touches the heart. tony

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Hassan Hayati 14 September 2019

Dr I am truly humbled by your kind comments. appreciate

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Bipasha D 07 February 2019

A poem full of emotion and love. Specially loved these lines: I had heard that the body is just a cage For the bird of spirit with all plumage The bird of your soul is flying around I know you are here,

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Hassan Hayati 10 February 2019

thanks for your kind comment. it makes me encouraged.

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Amir Marandi 03 January 2019

An excellent, intense and emotional poem. Well crafted. Memories of the loved one who transitioned never fade away and have a special place in our hearts.

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Hassan Hayati 05 January 2019

Yes, this is life. we live together for years and we do not care, while we lose the loved ones we then find their empty place and this is late.

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