Rule Of Love Poem by hassan hayati

Rule Of Love

Rating: 4.5


The rule of love
I spoke, I advised
It did not work
I kept mute, did it ever work?
I focused on the heart
No result
I ignored a long while, that delicate part
Then I smiled, I frowned
I laughed, I cried
It did not work
Heart headed its own way and taste
Then I just innocently followed I was chaste
It took me to the Love Land
How eyeful, pretty I saw no band
Not usually brain is correct and right
Be brave and follow your heart
With all might
The birds get more love under the rain
While you get sick there, as per the rule of brain
The rule of love is strange
It can face the whole world a big change

Rule Of Love
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2019

hen I just innocently followed I was chaste It took me to the Love Land How eyeful, pretty I saw no band Not usually brain is correct and right Be brave and follow your heart.. very great advice. follow your inspirations. follow your heart. tony

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Hassan Hayati 07 June 2019

thanks DR. for your encouraging comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2019

Love is something that has no rules, nothing is wrong in love and nothing is right in love. Love is above all rules and laws. A lovely poem.

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Hassan Hayati 28 April 2019

this is my great pleasure to see your heart warming comments sir, thank you

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 January 2018

Hassan, just read some of your beautiful poems. You have a way of writing verses that is appealing. The rule of love is strange and unpredictable. I love your picture with the two birds.

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Hassan Hayati 27 April 2019

Dear, Dr. Menon; For me it is great honor to see your comments about the lines I write. it is always encouraging to receive heart warming words from an Expert. I appreciate.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

This is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression and nice collocations. Let me quote.......... The birds get more love under the rain While you get sick there, as per the rule of brain The rule of love is strange It can face the whole world a big change Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.10

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Hassan Hayati 04 December 2017

Sorry for late response Kumar I was on a job mission in far. I really appreciate your attention, It is so much kind of you to read my writings.

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Stella Allou 08 November 2017

I was quite moved when reading this carefully woven masterpiece

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Hassan Hayati 10 November 2017

thank you very much Stella. I appreciate your attention. SEPAS, it means Thanks in Persian language.

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