Scottish Sky - Haiku Poem by Alice Anne Gordon

Scottish Sky - Haiku

Rating: 2.8


Heavy gunner blue
Sky hangs low uninviting
Shrapnel raindrops slice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leonard Daranjo 09 October 2007

How well you have brought out magic of a Scottish Sky which, today, I can say I have seen - with my mind's eye.Thanks to seventeen syllables of pure magic. The lyrical rhythm of the Haiku along with key descriptive words, removed from their wrappers, bring out the magic of this natural phenomenon. When you look at something like this It is just one of those things happening in the sky But look more closely and you will find That it is different - totally different When you look at it With the inner eye Take care...

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