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I will search for the light
In the midst of dark night
From the mortal world
To the ocean of plight
Underneath your heart
The corner still alight
I will search for the light
From the barren fields
To the myriad heights
In the torments of Solitude
The symbol of respite
Above the dreary world something is bright
In your eyes
I will search for the light.
Very beautiful poem Mohit, in search for the light, yes and I see the light in you shining bright sometimes we feel darkness has overtaken us only lessons for us to search deeper within for the light! I love your poem very much, it is beautiful and pure truth.
Really nice one, I liked it, it is small but very expressing, nice one! ! !
Great poem. The end rhyme makes the poem a delight to read. The use of searching for the light in solitude, barren fields demonstrates the resolve. Keeping searching for the light
Nice composition to read! It is interesting to read from the beginning to the last! Ending is very good!
I liked this one I would of never been able to think of anything like this...If you have read any of my poems you'd understand :) I think you diserve more comments then you have.Keep writing my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really like this poem and the words you use