Seashells, Waves And Sun Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Seashells, Waves And Sun

Rating: 5.0


I have a bag of seashells
Collected from acres of sand
Sums up my walk's treasure
At my abode, an idle land

Counting waves that meet
The bottom of my fanning toes
Their crests smother my face
While I pause three breaths

The love of the early sun
Breathes out new beginnings
Hugs gently my salty skin
Perks up my solemn heart

Sunday, August 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 20 August 2018

Melanie, such a heartwarming wonderful poem....10++++

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Melanie Emiko 20 August 2018

Thank you for that comment Mr. Asuncion.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 19 August 2018

When one breaths even, conscientiously, one would see even the most trivial thing differently, to what average does. Only a sharp enough mind has this capability and only a poet can share it with the rest heartily and passionately. Lot to read between lines and I like this style. Thank you Melanie for sharing.

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Melanie Emiko 19 August 2018

Thank you for that hearty comment.

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