Second Chance Poem by Candymarie Nevin

Second Chance

Rating: 4.0


As you take that one step at a time to conquer that addiction

Feeling so lost and unaware and unknowning

What will happen next as I look pasted all the depreciation you seem to tell

As I watched you battle this sickness I see you changed



Not knowing what to expected but I see clearly now

After all those mistakes you made it becomes something to treasure

When I look at you I see someone who I couldn't count on

As I look closer I see someone who looks at me like someone special.

05/16/16

Sunday, September 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my dad I love you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 18 September 2016

A difficult theme simplified and presented in verse form. It is a laudable job. Thanks for sharing.8 points.

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