L C Vieira

Rookie (Lisbon, Portugal)

Second Opinion


So there's my Second Opinion,
THAT look -
annoyed.
How dare I show you
something so -

SILLY!

I thought it good.

(or I pretend)
aware that you don't care
for my defence.

Young stubborn stance!

It's your poor eyes that I offend!

This sorry start.

I have no doubt
you'll make it right,
as true is true
out there, in sight.

My Second Opinion
unto that end,
is never wasted
as first, my friend.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 24, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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