(05-18-1994 / San Ramon, California)

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Secrets

My life is a dream gone bad
Wishing for a wish, but a wish i never had
Until i met the girl
Who was meant to rock my world
My life would be complete
If i had her in my arms, in my sleep
Should i tell her how i feel
But would she think its not real
Its too much to be true
Just me and you
It could be the best
Thinking nothing of the rest
Hoping all goes well
I have many secrets to tell.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012

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  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma '? ? ? ? ? ' (5/30/2012 3:33:00 PM)

    A great write...enjoyed the poetic expression...

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  • Melecia Williams (5/30/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    This Poem Is Great, I've Read A Lot Of Crappy Boring Poems On Here, But This Paints A Mesmerising Picture.
    My Favorite Part Is: Wishing For A Wish, But I Wish I Never Had I Can Relate To Like All Your Poems Bro. Kudos To You.

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  • Sajna Kailas (5/30/2012 6:25:00 AM)

    wow, very lovely poem with a lot of emotions.
    you were wonderfully pictured the sincere desires. Loved it! ! ! !

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