Secrets Hidden In Cobweb Mind Corners Poem by Terence George Craddock

Secrets Hidden In Cobweb Mind Corners



secrets denial hidden
rest in crawlspace
cobweb mind corners

shadows
cancer spotting lonely
lost hearts

while virtue
cowers in haunted
banished exile

Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,mind,secrets,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in September 2020 on the 24.9.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'Elba Blues' by the poet Kurt Philip Behm.
Dedicated to the poet Kurt Philip Behm.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 25 September 2020

no comment showing, I will reply to my friend Deluke here. 'I am warming up to your machine gun staccato type poems. It really triggers the poetic synapses in my brain' yes sometimes I like to write staccato into poems, it was perceptive of you to spot that; some poems on less pleasant or horrible historical topics, I wrote like fish hooks catching in the throat, an unpleasant topic demanded the effect, makes it difficult to read aloud as it should be with some bitter themes.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 September 2020

Good poem. I am warming up to your machine gun staccato type poems. It really triggers the poetic synapses in my brain

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