Seemingly Endless Poem by Marieta Maglas

Seemingly Endless

Rating: 4.8


As the stars are shining at night
So it shines in my eyes the tear.
In silence, I can hold you tight
And I can feel our love, my dear.

The stars touch the light of the sun,
Because they're sparkling in the night,
In His Light, I pray like a nun
To feel His sadness in my sight.

I wait for the love He gives me,
As I feel your love when it rains,
He makes me what I want to be,
A part of you, without deep pains.

As yellow stars' light is endless,
So is our love, when it can shine.
And if feelings can be timeless,
The happiness must be divine.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

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A sensitive, spectacular and sweet poem.10.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 July 2009

Waiting for thrill of love that you give me, Which becomes more deeply when it rains, By turning me in what I want to be, A part of you, without deep pains............... thrill of love respires by beauty heart tunes deep by the blue....................what a kind of love intense that reasons to grow, by love of trust, , yet uniqueness lies in deep shadow of dream................. .

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

nice poem, lovely rhymes.............

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 March 2010

‘…realize that feelings are timeless…’ It only poet can feel…too much materialistics are blunt and bland of this taste and after taste…fine feelings… Ms. Nivedita 10 UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2009

As yellow stars are seemingly endless, The body is ephemerally. I realize that feelings are timeless And happiness is divinely........yeshappinessis eternity and that comesfrom pure soul.. lovely poemandonemust be contended with what ever sheor he is having...i liked it very much.....10 innocence regained

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Ivan Kodorkovski 20 November 2009

really cute! ! ! so much elegance! ! keep it up 10

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Ramsey Lynwood 16 November 2009

As yellow stars are seemingly endless, The body is ephemerally. I realize that feelings are timeless And happiness is divinely 10

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Macey Calleigh 16 November 2009

This is the life and true story of many women.....10

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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