Treasure Island

Marieta Maglas

(19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Your Words of Love


I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
With that last kiss.
And, after that,
Another kiss
And another exotic beach
And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
Of another ostensible seemingly love
Fulfilled my nothingness...
Among corals and shells,
Dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
Taken by the waves
And redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
That great eternal.....
I still love you,
I love you more, miss you more.
Yes, I still miss you
And I realize that all I can do now
Is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
Which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress,
When I touch it.
And slantingly I elect the oblivion,
When
I want to kiss again and again
Your gray-haired temple,
But, in reverting, I receive only
The kiss of our child...

Submitted: Wednesday, July 08, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

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  • Ken E Hall (7/5/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem love lost gone with the wind with love still burning in the home fires
    with the kiss of the child much comfort...hmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Simon Yel (12/15/2011 1:21:00 PM)

    it is actually very interesting and exciting.if love could be like this I hope there could be no divorce between partners in love (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/18/2011 7:03:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful write and I wonder why you are one of the top and so admired by everyone! God Bless for always! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (3/24/2011 10:29:00 AM)

    love intense yet silhouettes on the sands of time
    heart seems to mill in sea of sorrow yet not befalling, fantastic write by the passion, that makes the reader look back in meandering....as i do remember..., unique style,10+++., thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Ray Seymour (2/15/2011 12:18:00 PM)

    I really liked this poem. A lot. All but the last two lines, which come on too hard; and, if I were you, I'd soften them - for the sake of not spoiling the mood. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (2/7/2011 2:16:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. A voice of every heart and a gem for the lovers.
    I couldn't help loving the poem for its fragile emotions and vivid imagery.
    Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Ibrar Siddiqi (9/3/2010 2:17:00 PM)

    Marieta - a beautiful poem - as everyone has felt - love is like the sea - tkaes you to new shores, swim with different fish from the School of Life and it can fdorwn you, consume you.

    Thi spoem made me feel sad as i wished i met my wife when i was younger, i felt like a well worn sailor who visted too many ports - to have read your poem has made me reinforce my love for my soulamte and wife

    Thanks


    Ibrar Siddiqi (Report) Reply

  • veronique buea pre (8/25/2010 10:51:00 AM)

    i loved this poem very much its remember me how much i love my bf i let go of him cuz i love him so marvellous words of love which is there forever in heart :) (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/21/2010 9:13:00 AM)

    Romantic kiss finally culminated in ‘Our Kids’…jilt yet not split romance …wow! Swaying poetry … thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (7/3/2010 8:30:00 AM)

    From : Judy Meibach (New York United States; Female; 49)
    To : Marieta Maglas
    Date Time : 7/2/2010 9: 59: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your Words of Love

    I liked this piece - it had great imagery - and I felt like I was on the beach - the emotion was equally present in this piece as well - I might have put the poem into multiple stanzas to make it a bit easier to follow, but... (Report) Reply

  • IamNo body (5/28/2010 3:07:00 PM)

    ...And i realize that all I can do now
    is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
    which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress
    when I touch it... Beautifully done -solid poetry (Report) Reply

  • Somahadi Hadi (1/19/2010 6:31:00 PM)

    Love is honestly
    Love is willingness struggle
    Love isnot Hypocrite and
    Love isnot betraying.


    My opinion Your poem is ' The Greatest Poem '. (Report) Reply

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