hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,409 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Seldom Won - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Independence, liberty and freedom
Bloodlessly won seldom
Stalwarts and leaders had shown wisdom
This all we now read in class rooms

Who will not want to be in free country?
Where it is classless, non racial and sans misery
What else can be dreamed of to lead it happily?
And country is surging ahead steadily

Foreign occupants are taken as cruel and marauders
Their position is that of land hungry and invaders
They might have plundered the country in process
And brutally murdered for gaining the access

All said and done and now they have packed
No more claims on our land is staked
We are fully independent and sovereign
Free from any yoke as independence is regained

What is scenario there after?
Is country leading towards disaster?
Is the freedom struggle really a boom?
Is there any scope for poor with room?

It has tuned into grim reality
It has proved our incompetence and inability
We have pushed country into Dark Age
We failed to look after people and manage

Farmers are coming suicide
Politicians are asking for free ride
Everybody is on rampage and hands are full of corruption
The loot is clearly seen and going on without any interruption

Yes, death is wealth
To take pride for Poor’s health
Where are we today on this freedom day?
Can they take us to peaceful way?

Can we not dream for two square meals?
Can they not strike a simple deal?
They come once in five years
To feed with oasis waters in deaf years

No answer may ever be found
Out economy is claimed to be sound
All well but country is in ill health
Entire country is robbed of its wealth


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  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2011 10:37:00 PM)

    No answer may ever be found
    Out economy is claimed to be sound
    All well but country is in ill health
    Entire country is robbed of its wealth

    *India is celebrating its independence day on 15th august * (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, August 15, 2011


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