David DeSantis

Rookie (01/29/85 / Utica, NY)


Misfiring bearings.
She power’s my train.
I have no boundaries.
Like a moon,
I was meant to wane.

I am my own Caesar.
And nearly as vain.
These misfiring bearings,

As a nerve,
You lie to the brain.

Copyright (c) David DeSantis

Submitted: Monday, April 07, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, April 22, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Self-Esteem by David DeSantis )

  • Rookie Raindreamer Hippy (5/30/2008 8:36:00 PM)

    Brilliant, thoughtful, brave.'misfiring bearings'. LOVE it. This is AMAZING. You have talent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Rani Turton (4/24/2008 10:34:00 AM)

    'Like a moon/ I was meant to wane.' Brilliant but maybe not true? Thanks for this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (4/22/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    not sure about the vein-ity issue.. Was Caesar very veiny? That must be why he bled to death so fast after getting stabbing in the back! but a fun poem on the life, nonetheless... -c (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Laoibhse Ni Canain (4/22/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    'Boundry-less' indeed, this piece certainly proves you to be and any vainity you may indulge in is probably justified...perhaps you would consider Caesar as a 'nom de plume'? ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie L M (4/19/2008 11:17:00 AM)

    Perhaps my favorite of your poems thus far. Well structured. Elequent. Effortless flow.

    Well done. ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/17/2008 9:42:00 PM)

    Excellent. An original mind is definately at work here. Write on, David.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (4/17/2008 3:38:00 AM)

    I agree that self esteem is a trick of the brain, very clever writing by you here David, I will look out for more of your work,
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LOVEFOOL Aka (4/13/2008 7:08:00 PM)

    Wow this is very powerful and thought provoking good stuff as allways thanks Nik (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (4/11/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    Very clever penning. Yes 'Self Esteem' has to be a trick of the brain... don't you think? I like this... HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,288 Points David Harris (4/7/2008 11:21:00 AM)

    David, another brilliant poem. Top grade write. Top marks and thank for sharing this my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Campbell (4/7/2008 10:57:00 AM)

    that was excellent. like a moon i was meant to wane! great stuff. (Report) Reply

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