Senryu - 104 No Change Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 104 No Change

Rating: 5.0


with year nothing changed
behaviour or attitude
just the calendar

Monday, January 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,people,years
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2016

Yes! Just the calendar. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 04 January 2016

Too soon to tell for sure, but past experience steers to that assumption

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Rajnish Manga 04 January 2016

This is an objective assessment of what has or has not changed in life with the change of calendar. Nicely put across. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Manonton Dalan 04 January 2016

that's what I thought until I paid my taxes nice poem

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