Senryu - 221 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 221

Rating: 5.0


your absence lingers
by coming of the autumn
memory dew frosts

Friday, November 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,nature,senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 November 2016

This is also magical poem definitely that recognizes absence of God in life. And that is why this absence associated with life lingers for God only. Autumn comes to give alert to have Divine life with joy and knowledge. Memory dew plays vital role to feel love in frosts and this is magical to have interesting connection to nature. Autumn is nature's seasonal companion of love and this expresses a deep sense of humor and clarity we observe is universal truth and that is love. Love lingers in life and love lingers for getting love of God. An excellent Senryu this is definitely and I am rating 10 for this also.

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2016

Thank u so much for giving my three lines such a wonderful interpretation, I appreciate your efforts and salute your thinking power.....Thanks Much. God Bless You.

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