Senryu 29 (Jaded Heart) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 29 (Jaded Heart)

Rating: 4.8


Mixed like mist and clouds
Loneliness and solitude
Bell my jaded heart.

Monday, October 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,living
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The above senryu was inspired by reading Valsa's poem Loneliness And Solitude.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 09 October 2018

Oh! U like what you have done with this! ! Every line charms the poet in your reader as well as touches us emotionally. Incredible last line. 10++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

When mist and clouds mix each other we become confused to differentiate but beauty is excellently witnessed. When we feel that loneliness and solitude both are mixed then we feel greater hope of improvement as heart bells to perceive greater realm. An important poem is excellently penned...10

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