Senryu - Flying Wishes Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Flying Wishes

Rating: 5.0


open pomegranate
thousands of wishes scattered
a pandora box

Tuesday, November 30, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 November 2021

So earliest in the morn and such a friendliest Senryu! 5 Stars full on Top for Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. So very early in the NL and having LOL

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

A box of troubles....a pandora box! Excellent poem.........5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2021

Flying wishes like pomegranate seeds.....so beautiful and wonderful.......10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 December 2021

Fascinating Senryu. Superb imagery. To my Poem List.

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Tihama Hykam 02 December 2021

Very well thought Senryu

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 01 December 2021

Fabulous

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Maria Mitea 01 December 2021

Great one! 5 stars!

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