open pomegranate
thousands of wishes scattered
a pandora box
A box of troubles....a pandora box! Excellent poem.........5 stars
Flying wishes like pomegranate seeds.....so beautiful and wonderful.......10
Fascinating Senryu. Superb imagery. To my Poem List.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So earliest in the morn and such a friendliest Senryu! 5 Stars full on Top for Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir. So very early in the NL and having LOL