Senryu - Lasting Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Lasting Love

Rating: 5.0


Endless horizon
Inside your imposing eyes
i see umpteen dreams

Saturday, April 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 06 April 2019

Fantastic senryu Mohammed! Excellent!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 April 2019

Really, wonderful contemplation! Extremely well penned..............10

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Nosheen Irfan 07 April 2019

Great imagery. Gives immense poetic delight.

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Sameer Kinl 06 April 2019

A wonderful senryu, enjoyed the love part of it.

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Indira Renganathan 18 April 2019

Lovely....love of course is replete with dreams...10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Endless horizon! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2019

Love has endless horizon. No ending of its is found really. Excellent thought is shared here with expression of interesting view.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 April 2019

dream an entity since the birth of mind!

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Valsa George 07 April 2019

You have beautifully presented the depth and width of her beautiful eyes! A lovely senryu!

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