Separationfromyou Poem by Towseef Amin Dar

Separationfromyou

Rating: 4.5


Separation from you gave me the pain, deep as ocean.
My precious tears like drops of blood, valuable as gem.
Are falling, flowing, flooding like waves.
Like Salt, Washing away my pain.
And like the sand, Eroding my strength.
Just like a vain wish, Hoping you will comeback.
Worsening my condition than all these.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koffi B Sossou 01 February 2024

Nice and deep poem. I think the endless 'hope' makes it worst.

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Congratulations on Poem Of The Day recognition.

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