Kumar Kumar

Seven Oceans Of Pain! ! !

Swimming across the first ocean, i met my friend-tears,
he has been living there all alone for now many years,
he keeps count of all the little tears that i have shed,
on every tear, her name is tagged and my future is read.

Swimming across the second ocean, i met my friend-peace,
he left me the day my heart broke into million piece,
sitting on that island, he keeps the broken pieces whole,
and will hand over it to me, when i depart with my soul.

Swimming across the third ocean, i met my friend-night,
he lives there holding onto all my dreams ever so tight,
every dream showcases a portrait of my never ending love,
a love thats destiny seems to lie in the heaven above.

Swimming across the fourth ocean, i met my friend-smile,
he left me the day she refused to walk down the aisle,
he captures all the sadness that lies beneath my face,
and keeps them safely in my memories for me to chase.

Swimming across the fifth ocean, i met my friend-fears,
everytime i try to go in search of her, he just appears,
he stands in my way, with the sign that signals THE END,
for my heart is damaged way beyond any force could mend.

Swimming across the sixth ocean, i met my friend-time,
he seems to have deserted me after i did that crime,
a crime of loving someone more than what i could do,
now i'm just waiting for that portal to let me through.

Swimming across the seventh ocean, i met my friend-fate,
love is a hard journey, and not all can enter this gate,
in every journey undertaken the pain will always remain,
to succeed you have to cross this 'Seven Oceans Of Pain'.

Submitted: Saturday, April 14, 2007
Edited: Monday, February 14, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Seven Oceans Of Pain! ! ! by Kumar Kumar )

  • Rookie Analou Pabalate (9/7/2007 11:08:00 AM)

    yea love is not only happiness but sorrows and pain as well! what a great poem.! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leila K (4/14/2007 7:09:00 PM)

    Beautifullly composed...one of the best poems i have read in a very long time...a lot of pain.....love LeilaXXXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sean Godley (4/14/2007 10:58:00 AM)

    I liked this a lot Kumar - great write, especially the idea of swimming seven oceans. Sean (Report) Reply

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