Heat a rod red hot
press it into my eyes so hard.
Then with your lark voice,
you can very well ask
Does it hurt dear?
that shall be million times better
then this cruelty of your silence
which kills me in seconds.
well......silence hurts this much? real good! ....................or shall we say straight arrow to her heart!
Wow...so beautifully written...I'm very impressed! Hugs, Dee
very poignant. I ve felt the pain of silence and you have captured it in your poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow silence strikes with that heavy hand doesn't it...great work..~hazel!