Shadow Of Light Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Shadow Of Light

Rating: 5.0


Crawling sun in its youth
Playing games with human body

You’ve left me without any reasons
Tsunami came bypassing all alarm signals

So I decided to leave for solitary confinement
and find what went wrong with satisfying answers

But my efforts all looked very futile
as world pulled me back to its tiles

Now I sit back on my ashes wondering and
trying to control my spinning brain

It is so hard to ponder on mistakes
blame self or demons for every fails

It’s time to take some bitter actions
gulp tensions and move on, look forward

And I look forward to a beautiful world
That lies beneath my foot clam and quite.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 21 October 2015

Moving on is the right decision Thanks Asim-10

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Mohamed Fazloon 21 October 2015

Wow that's a very beautiful poem. Well done, well written as usual!

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Brilliant write man, good to read it.

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T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

Art of writing a poem from sad to happy ending.Good write Asim.

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Sanjukta Nag 22 October 2015

Though the beginning is melancholic but you end up spreading hope in the sky of life. Wonderful as always.10++

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Kelly Kurt 21 October 2015

Inspirational and as always, well written

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Rajnish Manga 21 October 2015

A very thoughtful poem probing Tsunami and the devastation in its aftermath which ultimately brings peace and quiet to life. A quote: It is so hard to ponder on mistakes blame self or demons for every fails

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