She Is Alone With Her Thoughts. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

She Is Alone With Her Thoughts.

Rating: 5.0


When the breeze carries tenderness
How can someone remain aloof?
By the caring, soft touches
On the milky ways of life ~

There she folds her legs
And spreads her arms
Sitting upon the knees
Asking for nothing but true love ♥

The limitations between
the sunrise and the sunset
ceases by offering
the joy of fleeting moments
the rising thoughts lifts her spirit.

Her life flies with the dove
and reaches the zenith of greatness
where no fear touches the body or soul
In silence she is alone with her thoughts.

Sunday, February 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan Trajan Renganathan 28 February 2021

Superb expression! ! ! !

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Varsha M 28 February 2021

Sir this is really beautiful. Indeed st zenith, in her silence, no more fear but still pouring care. Lovely poem sir.

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Mamta 01 March 2021

Such a wonderful poem, you explored true beauty of a women.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 March 2021

I loved it. Its deep, but not in that senses.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 March 2021

A cleverest poem about a female person, surrounded by all kind of magic and wonders on the milky ways of life. In silence she is alone with her thoughts, a very logic conclusion, dear Asim Sir! Most loveliest presented.5 Stars!

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Darren Jkoeryo 01 March 2021

DJ liked this expressive poem

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Deepak S S 01 March 2021

Superb. The limitations between the sunrise and the sunset.

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Hamster Drill 01 March 2021

Yet another perfect poem.

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