Shadows..... Poem by prashant shaurya

I like the meaning and imagery in this poem Prashant and the contrast in the first stanza between the white moon and bright creatures. You have delved deep with this one and I commend you for it. love Karin

This is a wonderful concept with rhymes, imagery and lines that beautifully go, 'In the night / when moon's white / I see creatures / very bright...'

Oh this is very good now Prashant....well done with it. Ruthie: -))

Clever imagery with simplicity! ! Keep up the good work!

dear prashant........when we lose our own we feel we have lost all, andhence feel lost for a moment.yet we know the soul is eternal, it gives us courage to plod on.we sometimes feel they are around, and it gives us peace.poem has great imagery, and rhymes well.thanks for sharing. ritty

'And i delve deep At length to peep' Rachel Ann Butler

vow! realy beautiful.great thoughts. nice composition.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

nice surrealistic rational poem, well written, thank you for sharing...........10+++

a want for spiritual catharsis, to rise above the shadows of mortality and connect with the Higher Essence..well done.