She had the color of dusk
on her bonny bright face
and her voice had a husk
with a sensuous trace....
In a notable style
her hair she wore
and her healing smile
many hearts did cure...
And her naughty eyes
had a lovely lure
as anyone who tries
would be lost for sure....
And I prayed today
GOD make me all hers
and let me stay
within her life's verse...
And I prayed today GOD make me all hers and let me stay within her life's verse... This is so wonderful, prashant. Some would pray for God to make her all yours; you instead pray to be hers, all of you. Fantastic. I guess you have so much to offer her.10, indeed
wow... very beautifully written.... ten on ten.... wish wud have been at that girl's place ;)
I take this poem for it soundness whether it fatch you the lady or not. K**p it up.
I enjoyed your poem...you are so clever and I believe object of your admiration know it also...thumb up! ! ! ....+10 point is yours!
Flash or catalysis in poetic mind in reading room [very infectious lolol] with crafting poem…as poet has done it…excellent… But finish is awesome well ‘i am not at ease these days....’ hush huh hu in poetic mind and readers too Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
dear prashant........i could almost visualise this pretty girl of your poem.beautiful flow of words makes it more interesting.lovely poem..........ritty
And her naughty eyes had a lovely lure as anyone who tries would be lost for sure.... And I prayed today GOD make me all hers and let me stay within her life's verse.....well you are lost in pull..there is rule of attraction and it works..it is natural that one is drawn into ////// lovly poem....10 read mine...anywhere.... imiss..miss i miss u..... marry to merry..(this u must read)
Smooth in its flow, bright in its glow powerful in its meaning and grand in its content...this is a wondeful poem...I am giving it a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a charming poem... i can't imagine her not liking it.....