footsteps echo
bouncing from one thick wall
to the next
the heart beat races
breathing becomes shallow
everything is a blur
looking down the tunnel
wondering why
shadows start to constrict
an overwhelming pain
trying to get relief
there's just pain
the tunnel ends
but only shadows remain
WOW! ! ! Very deep. for a few words in a poem great work
Very deep expression...shadows are the keepers of light keep up this gift best wishes Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well they do say that death is very much a part of life.. even if it's fully concealed within the shadow's realm.. Alot said in this write.. Powerful piece young poetess! Write On! !