Shannon's Mill Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Shannon's Mill

Rating: 5.0


Twas on that solemn August eve
When skies did glow like setting sun
A time that no one shall forget
That tore the town apart,
The ruins smoldered through the morn
And smoke engulfed the locals who
Surveyed the scene with disbelief
And sadness filled each heart.
The soul had gone
The spirit lost
We all had paid a dreadful cost.

The building stood yet but a shell
The landscape now forever changed
Where once a proud reminder of
Those days so long ago,
The workers who had stiched the seam
And cut the cloth for many years
Could not believe it all was gone
So many tears did flow.
They looked towards the smoky sky
And there they stood all asking why?

The site now cleared there's nothing left
An empty void that can't be filled
Another jewel been taken by
That undeserving hand,
For all those lives it helped to forge
Their memories now but ash and dust
And blown upon the weeping wind
Across the barren land,
The stars did shine
The night was still
When flames engulfed old Shannon's Mill.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 24 March 2008

Fantastic rendition of such an awful happening Andrew. I could smell the smoke and feel the heat from this write. Well done indeed. Excellent piece of work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 07 February 2008

A beautiful and poignant poem Andrew! You've captured it gracefully in your penning! ! Best regards Friend Thad

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Andrew Blakemore 07 February 2008

This poem is about a large building in the centre of Walsall called Shannon's Mill. It was part of the town's heritage. Here they once made high quality men's clothing. The building dominated the town's skyline since it was built in 1887. It was sadly burnt down by arsonists on August 3rd 2007. It was said to have been the largest fire in the Midlands for over 25 years and a very sad day for us all.

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