She Does Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

She Does

Rating: 5.0


The grip was practiced and secure,
an ambience of her humid heat,
she'd tamed a wandering troubadour
and found this luxury retreat.

She liked him passive and supine,
no selfish touches to confuse.
Tall candles and red summerwine,
all conscious thoughts were just a ruse.

He'd liken it, she knew his mind,
to a long piston on the move
tied to a spring that would unwind,
while tracking neatly in its groove.

Men were soo technical, of course
all wheels and bearings, bolts and nuts,
she felt the life blood of a horse
yet always clasped their silly butts.

She liked explosions, always had.
Small tremors, building to a wave,
volcanoes always scare a lad
and swallows represent the brave.

Convulsions was the word she used,
a sudden hint of laundry bleach,
a tiny smile as if amused
and stirrings in her private peach.

' You DO? ' He was in shock and awe,
she said 'I thought it was the thing! '
Two bodies, hot and in the raw,
an eros arrow, would it sting?

A symbolism then descends,
embraces hot and tender skin.
Inhaling fragrance it suspends
all time and reason, deep within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 16 January 2008

Hi Herbert! Very good write as always! ! You must ask Rachel to write another one of her poems also one day! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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