hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 23,623 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

She was force

I never thought it seriously
It must have occurred readily
There was no confusion
Yet it ruled with many questions

Why was I hesitant?
Why was I so much persistent?
When she had openly admitted!
Each allegation she had rebutted

She was force to reckon with
Fully knowledgeable and armed with teeth
She will not succumb to any pressure
Her stand was firm and absolutely clear

“I am in love with you: ” she smiled
“You will have to prove true” she replied
She was not in defiant mood
But she knew well and understood

I was shaky from the start
She proved very much smart
At every inch she was assertive
To the point and very much selective

I was not subdued but felt lucky
She was bold and never felt shaky
I gave full nod to our relation
It further added to our elation

I have every reason to feel good
The bond as such has been understood
We got to move ahead with one aim
There has to success all the time to claim

Submitted: Monday, December 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, December 09, 2013


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