Shores Of My Heart❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Shores Of My Heart❤️

Rating: 5.0


Between the shores of my heart
under the flowing lustrous holy river
where the white dove of wishes
floats on the chariot of stars
teasing drunken mischievous moon.

I make a bridge of love to drink
from the intoxicated lips of fate
which will fill, drop by drop my cup's thirst
where the virgin red roses
from the exotic garden of bosom
waits to get crushed under passionate action.

The cerise shyness on her cheek
will melt by the fire of my passion
making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls
and two uncut diamonds in dark night
will luminesce my heart's mind
your gentle smile will remove the fatigue
and your scent will be carried by the wind.

Wednesday, November 23, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 24 November 2022

Great metaphors are used by u dear Dr.Nehal.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 24 November 2022

Pure poetry nicely conceived and written, after long gap welcome back.

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S H 24 November 2022

I make a bridge of love to drink From the intoxicated lips of fate........Philosophy of life in a different way.

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Bri Edwards 27 November 2022

Well, Asim, you've requested I read the poem and I have. I shall leave a comment or two now and may come again if you reequest it again. I don't care usually for love poems, nor do I care usually for symbolism.

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M. Asim Nehal 29 November 2022

Many thanks for honouring my request.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 November 2022

What a wonderful poem! Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2022

Congratulations for your appearance on the 100 List of Best Poems of Member Poets of PH. To my Favourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2022

You have had a thousand days sleep, now awakan again with this marvelous wonderful romantic narrative about LIFE,5 Stars TOP Score and myriad more, dear Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir

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M. Asim Nehal 16 May 2023

Thanks much Madam....

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Juhaina Tumlu 24 November 2022

Very hopeful poem 'Millions of joy will remove the fatigue And the scent will be carried by the wind.' great lines

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