Short Poem ~ Test Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem ~ Test

Rating: 5.0


To test the true humanity in humans ~
Check their greed level.
And how they deal with down trodden
The truth will come up like cream on boiled milk.

Thursday, February 2, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: life,humanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzon Albert 02 February 2023

True test and last line sums up all.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

So very true. We could see their true colors with these these tests. A brilliant and well thought out write. Liked these words; like cream on boiled milk

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

So, greed is the characteristics of inhuman!

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Nabakishore Dash 04 February 2023

Three cheers for this nice test.Excellent.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 February 2023

Love the simile in the last line. You make wisdom and poetry go well together. Kudos!

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Juhaina Tumlu 03 February 2023

No one can supress truth no matter what they do.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 February 2023

excellent metphor

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