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Shashendra Amalshan (5/28/2009 4:13:00 AM)
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feels like words from an angel anjali..sooo very beautiful...I enjoyed it very much...you know it's no wonder you have lots of fans..cause your words can capture many hearts...
hope you are smiling now..thanks anju A++++++++
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Aamit Rothschild (4/13/2009 9:47:00 AM)
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Come now
Hearken!
to my heartbeats
for there shall neither
be a separation
nor a waiting on
death row
Sequel-
'Come on hold my hands
Don't leave me in all this pain of love
Don't laugh at me in the rain of love
Come back and bring back my smile
Come kiss my fears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I wished
wished to hold you beside me
And i lip-synch-
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked outta my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many nights
Un-break my heart
My heart
Take back that sad word good-bye
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss this pain away
I can't forget the day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Bring back the nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Come back and say you love me
Un-break my heart
Sweet darlin'
Without you I just can't go on
Can't go on
Nice and Nagging........++++++++10
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Mahfooz Ali (4/1/2009 1:43:00 PM)
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You are the true my distant fren..........
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Mahfooz Ali (4/1/2009 1:43:00 PM)
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Of! ho! plz bund karo na yeh shower..... main bheeg jaunga............
Achcha..... after so much traumas in my life............ u filled the colors.........
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Ruerd Visser (3/26/2009 3:58:00 PM)
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I'm delighted that you found me its such a joy to discover the work of fellow poets who pour out their hearts and souls.
Keep watching with those oceanic eyes and reavel your vision to the world!
Dreamsgreetings from Friesland
Boomfriend Ruerd
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~ Jon London ~ (3/10/2009 6:38:00 AM)
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All that surrounds, love fills the earth let it's beauty fall around...stunning 10+++
You're an excellent poetess, your ability to creat such fine writes with you soft and gentle flow, is to be admired....and I do admire you. Keep expressing
Jon London
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Eyan Desir (2/9/2009 9:41:00 AM)
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nice poem, good follow
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Ridge Cahill (2/8/2009 8:51:00 PM)
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O’ what a beautiful bouquet you splay before us -
My sunlight of knowledge
And my moonlight of love
Transformed the mud of
Ignorance and
opened the petals of your
lotus mind
A poem wrought of much emotion – desire, doubt and certainty. The last two lines are simply magnificent. Only to be showered so. Bravo!
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