Whenever I remember those days
automatically a mischievous smile appears on face and eyes becomes wet
Inside me, I am desperately searching the same innocence
But, sorry friends
Nowdays, fake smile is an essence
My heart wants to be child once again
and to dance carelessly in the rain
but sorry,
I am young now, my mind has grown
so it will have to bear all the pain on its own
Being child was more enjoying
more rewarding
but TIME which has elapsed never come
now best part of LIFE has gone: -(
wonderful poem is it.. love it.. see my poem '' adolescence'' i had written the same thing a year ago....especially the last line....i love it and wish i had written like it again...aw
A very nice comparison of the past and the present in life.
childhood is definitely the best time of life. great write.
pro memoria; childhood and mirth is worth to remember but vanity kills, shadowy smile more than the venom that bite thank u God bless you thanks dear 10
yes, days of childhood will always be good for all of us, the time when we still work ourselves without fear, positive, love and innocent...aging not only wrinkle skin but damaging heart..._Soul
nicely written. brings nostalgic memories. well i cant repent that i have grown up. a very good piece. :)
nicely written. brings nostalgic memories. well i cant repent that i have grown up. a very good piece. :)
It is my desire too.Loved the lines- - - Being child was more enjoying more rewarding but TIME which has elapsed never come now best part of LIFE has gone
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great composition! ! It's true though. Everyone around me wishes to be young, to change things, once again. However, those who led a more responsible, understanding, less rebellious childhood, enjoy their life, no matter their age. Great write!